My rage was when I found out, we had school on presidents day. I immediately got mad and was angry. One reason was because, all my friends had that day off and they would put it in my face about how our school had that day. It made me so angry, I just couldnt handle myself.
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I thought this was an excellent blog entry because of the fact that you addressed the question the way we were suppose to using "Why you were mad?" thought you might want to make it a little longer if you want. -Chance
I thought that this blog entry was great because you had detail and said how you really felt about what happened that day.I realte that reason too, like when it was a presidents birthday and we didn't have the day off and my other friends in other schools had the day off which really made mad because how come we don't have the day off and other schools do.One thing that I would suggest is to make the paragraph longer.
Hey Dyllan, You should explain why you were mad at the school in more detail. Like if you yelled at someone or took it out on one of your friends who had the day off.
i thought that this one was one of the best on your blog. Because, even thougt it was kind of short you used a lot of detail and said why you go mad. And what the reason was. I like that very much.
I liked this piece a lot because you used a lot of ways to describe what happened, and why you were mad.I though this was a good piece, I think it is one of the best one your blog. Evne though it was kind of short. I think something that you can improve on in this piece is add more detail to make it longer bu, for now it is good. But things can always become better.
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